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제목 HI~~~~ 등록일 2026-03-20
내용 Nice to meet U.
When we called that time, I told you reason why I learn the conversation in English
I want to communicate the foreign people.. when I will retire in 2027
I have a lack of an oversea travel experience. So I have a much worries of communicate with them
I hope you help me that point. not yet my capacity of communication skill is low , but if you might teach me. My capacity of communication skill will upgrade ! . like this the English composition is not easy to me ^^
Anyway glad to meet you , I’m very happy and thanks
See u later ~~~
담당강사 Carrie 등록일 2026-03-21
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Nice to meet you!
When we talked before, I told you the reason why I want to learn English conversation.
I would like to communicate with foreign people when I will retire in 2027.
I don't have much overseas travel experience so I feel worried about communicating with others.
I hope you can help me improve. My communication skills are still not strong, but with your help and guidance I believe I can improve a lot! Writing in English is not easy for me. ^^
Anyway, I'm glad to meet you. I’m very happy and thankful.
See u later ~~~

Hi! It's my pleasure to meet you.

I would be glad to help you. Let us study hard and have fun learning English together. See you next week!

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