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제목 9/14 Homework 등록일 2025-09-17
내용 I’m a little bit worried about this weekend.

I just left all the work to my future.

Usually I buy something impulsively, like a card or a pen.

I always lose it.

Last year I saw a TV program that was selling bags.

I felt really bad at that time.

I'm exactly in the same situation.

Next week is my salary day.
담당강사 TasH2usa 등록일 2025-09-17
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1. Little bit worried about my this weekend,
- S Correction: I’m a little bit worried about this weekend.
- T Revision: Great! 

2. I just left all the works to the future of me.
- S Correction: I just left all the work to my future.
- T Revision: I just left all the work to my future self.

3. Usually I just buy something impulsive like card, and pen.
- S Correction: Usually I buy something impulsively, like a card or a pen.
- T Revision: I usually buy many things impulsively, like cards or pens. (Changed to plural) 

4. I always lost it every time. (Present)
- S Correction: I always lose it.
- T Revision: I always lose them. (Changed to plural)

5. Last year I just saw a tv program that just selling bags.
- S Correction: Last year I saw a TV program that was selling bags.
- T Revision: Great! 

6. My feelings really bad in that time. (past)
- S Correction: I felt really bad at that time.
- T Revision: Great!

7. I'm in that case right now.
- S Correction: I'm exactly in the same situation.
- T Revision: I'm in the same situation right now. 

8. Next week my salary day.
- S Correction: Next week is my salary day.
- T Revision: Great! 

 

 

GREAT JOB TODAY JIA! YOU'VE SHOWN MASSIVE IMPROVEMENT SINCE OUR FIRST CLASS. laugh

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