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제목 | Part1 | 등록일 | 2025-04-11 |
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내용 | I want to be a mathematician in the future. The person I respect is mathematician. Huh Jun E of Korea He is known for being awarded the Fields Medal, a prize that is greater than the Nobel Prize. Actually, his skill in math was not that good when he was young, but he had many opportunities to become a mathematician. Plus, his curiosity about math led him to become a mathematician. Now, he has successfully solved numerous mathematical problems through experimentation, including Rota's conjecture. | ||
담당강사 | Heni2 | 등록일 | 2025-04-11 |
첨삭 내용 | I want to be a mathematician in the future. The person I respect is mathematician. Huh Jun E of Korea He is known for being awarded the Fields Medal, a prize that is greater than the Nobel Prize. Actually, his skill in math was not that good when he was young, but he had many opportunities to become a mathematician. (Plus,) ( IT WOULD BE BETTER TO SAY: Moreover, or Furthermore,) his curiosity about math led him to become a mathematician. Now, he has successfully solved numerous mathematical problems through experimentation, including Rota's conjecture. |