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제목 hello robin 등록일 2025-02-17
내용 im chris.
glad to meet you.
i learned chinese long time so chinese comes to mind first.
I want to speak English that foreigners can understand even if it doesn't fit the grammar.
when i go to work in subway, i always listen english by Youtube.
when we study today your voice a little not clear.
i think my cell phone or your phone are problem.
tomorrow i will put on earphone.
thank you very much i hope you all good!!
담당강사 RobinA1usa 등록일 2025-02-17
첨삭 내용

Hello Robin.

My name is Chris. I am delighted to meet you. 

I learned Chinese a while back, so Chinese is my first language. 

I want to speak English that foreigners can understand even if it doesn't fit the grammar. 

When I am on my way to work on the subway, I always listen to English conversations on YouTube.

When we were studying today, your voice was a little bit unclear for me.

I think it might have been my cellphone or it was a problem with your phone on your end. Tomorrow, I will use my earphones.

 

Thank you very much, I hope all is good. 

 

 

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