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제목 Lunar New Year holiday 등록일 2025-02-13
내용 During the Lunar New Year holiday, I went on a 2-night, 3-day trip to Gunsan, Byeonsan, Hampyeong, and Mokpo with my parents.
Among them, Gunsan and Mokpo are cities with painful histories.
In the past, during the Japanese colonial period, a port was built to steal Korea's grain and cultural heritage, and it was a very large port city at the time.
Even now, many Japanese-style buildings remain.
Hampyeong Seawater Steaming is famous for boiling Hampyeong Bay's natural seawater, which contains germanium, with sulfur stones directly heated with pine firewood.
My parents especially liked it.
담당강사 FionaA2usa 등록일 2025-02-18
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During the Lunar New Year holiday, I went on a 2-night, 3-day trip to Gunsan, Byeonsan, Hampyeong, and Mokpo with my parents.
Among them, Gunsan and Mokpo are cities with painful histories.
In the past, during the Japanese colonial period, a port was built to steal Korea's grain and cultural heritage, and it was a very large port city at the time.
Even now, many Japanese-style buildings remain.
Hampyeong Seawater Steaming is famous for boiling Hampyeong Bay's natural seawater, which contains germanium, with sulfur stones directly heated with pine firewood.
My parents especially liked it.

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