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제목 Lesson 4, Make sentences. 등록일 2023-03-21
내용 [Key]
1)I was wondering if I could work together in this team as Product Manager.

2) Today, I heard that I could go to abroad several times for business trips. I could not believe my ears.

3) I am uncomforable with coworkers who work in same place or floor. I want to work in disconneted space such as indiviual studio.

4) Would you be able to workout after working every night? I can't. I am exhausted to adapted for new position in my company.
[What]
I think I prefer to a neat person then messy person. but I don't like clean. I just throw away something faster. I didnt pile anything.
담당강사 mandela2usa 등록일 2023-03-21
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[Key]
1)I was wondering if I could work on this team as the Product Manager.

2) Today, I heard that I could go abroad several times on business trips. I could not believe my ears.

3) I am uncomforable with coworkers who work in the same place or floor as me. I want to work in a disconneted space such as an indiviual studio.

4) Would you be able to workout after work every night? I can't. I am exhausted adapting to my new position in my company.
[What]
I think I prefer to be a neat person than a messy person. but I don't like to clean. I just throw away things fast. I don't let things pile up.

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