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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-06-17
내용 I don’t remember the impressive photographs which I took pictures.
When I was young, my eldest sister had to leave our country, so we wanted to make good memories and our family took pictures in Photo Studio.
A several months later, my elder brother went to Photo Studio to take pictures back.
But the Photo Studio already moved another place. We inquired here and there where the Photo Studio moved.
Owner of the shop next door said that before the Studio had moved another place, they were worried about not taking pictures back but he said he didn’t know about photos.
I was very regretable if my elder brother had gone the Studio a little earlier.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-06-20
첨삭 내용

Good job, Rose!

I don’t remember the most impressive photographs I taken.
When I was young, my eldest sister had to leave our country, so we wanted to make good memories and our family took pictures at a photo studio.
Several months later, my elder brother went to the photo studio to take pictures, but the photo studio already moved to another place. We inquired here and there where the photo studio moved.
The owner of the shop next door said that before the studio had moved to another place, they were worried about not taking pictures back, but he said he didn’t know about photos.
I regret that my elder brother didn't go to the studio a little earlier.

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