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제목 help me, please! 등록일 2016-06-06
내용 This topic is a very question to answer. Repairing something in the house is up to my husband.
Frankly, I am not interested in repairing or decorating my house.
It always happens to repair a detached house, expecially old house.
We have a tool kit with electric drive, wrench, saw, shovel.
One day, a jujube tree in my front yard was dead. we had to cut the tree and clear up.
My husband cut the tree with saw and pulled out the root with shovel.
But it was not easy to work. If we had had electric saw, we could have finished the work smartly.
Working with small saw took a long time. His face was covered in swear.
My mother-in-law helped her son's work
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-06-07
첨삭 내용

Great job, Rose!

This topic is a very hard question to answer. Repairing something in the house is up to my husband.
Frankly, I am not interested in repairing or decorating my house.
Detached houses always need repair, especially old ones.
We have a tool kit with an electric screwdriver, a wrench, a saw, and a shovel.
One day, a jujube tree in my front yard was dead. We had to cut down the tree and clear it out.
My husband cut down the tree with a saw and pulled out the root with a shovel.
But it was not easy work. If we had had an electric saw, we could have finished the work quickly.
Working with a small saw took a long time. His face was covered in sweat.
My mother in-law helped him work.

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