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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-05-31
내용 Hello! Leejun. This is youngsook speaking.
I’m calling to know whether you’d like to go to see a baseball game.
The Samsung against Hanhwa game is due to next weekend.
The two teams are outsanding this season.
I have two tickets for the game.
I hope that we altogether go to the stadium.
The baseball stadium was built recently in modern.
If we cheer for our team, we can get rid of stress and have a good weekend. You won’t regret it.
If we are hungry, we can buy the fried chicken and junk food in snack bar.
I’ll see you at 5 p.m in the subway exit No. 8 next Saturday
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-06-01
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Great job, Rose!

Hello, Leejun. This is Youngsook speaking.
I’m calling to see if you’d like to go to see a baseball game.
Samsung vs. Hanhwa game is next weekend.
The two teams are outsanding this season.
I have two tickets for the game.
I hope that we can go to the stadium together.
The baseball stadium was built recentlyand is very modern.
If we cheer for our team, we can get rid of stress and have a good weekend. You won’t regret it.
If we are hungry, we can buy fried chicken and junk food from the snack bar.
I’ll see you at 5 p.m in the subway at exit No. 8 next Saturday.

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