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제목 Takes in office 3 등록일 2016-05-26
내용 My the biggest challenge in my job is a project which I do now. The project is pretty big and very difficult. And I have to complete until this August. Also I have few men month. I don't think it's fair. However, I definitly have to finish it by due day. So I work hard everyday. And I make an effored a lot. I meet so many colleages for our job. Sometimes, I request junior colleages to work hard and to keep their work by due day. So we have turable each other. But I am in order to over come it, I make en efford to hear their voice and their think. I think if I understand them well, they have a comport. Until I success my project, I will work well with my junior collegages.
담당강사 Sheryl 등록일 2016-05-26
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My biggest challenge in job is the project which I do now. The project is pretty big and very difficult. And I have to complete it until August. Also, I have few months left. I don't think it's fair. However, I definitely have to finish it by its due date. So I work hard everyday. And I make an effort a lot. I meet so many colleagues for our job. Sometimes, I request junior colleagues to work hard and to keep their work by due date. So we have trouble with each other. But I am in order to overcome it, I make an effort to hear their voices and their thinkings. I think if I understand them well, they will be comforted. Until I succeed on my project, I will work well with my junior colleagues.

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