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제목	help, please	등록일	2016-05-18
내용	People do many works at the bank. The most work to do is depositing and withdrawing money from their bank accounts. Second, they pay taxes such as electrical bill, maintenance fee and so on. Third, people can get loans at banks to buy houses and borrow living expenses. But nowadays, young people don’t often go to the bank. According to the internet development, people treat many works through the internet by computer or cellularphone those kinds of things. In my case, I always do bank works through the internet. I don’t need to waste time without waiting in line and I transact money regardless of time and place.
담당강사	Hunter1	등록일	2016-05-19
첨삭 내용	Great job, Rose. I also prefer to bank online :) People do lots of work (or) many tasks at the bank. The most work to do is depositing and withdrawing money from their bank accounts. Second, they pay taxes such as electric bills, maintenance fees, and so on. Third, people can get loans at banks to buy houses and borrow for living expenses. Nowadays, young people don’t often go to the bank. The internet allows people to handle banking online with computers and smartphones. In my case, I always bank through the internet. I don’t need to waste time waiting in line when I can make transactions regardless of time and place.