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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-05-16
내용 Hello Leejun, this is youngsook speaking. How have you been?
I am calling to wonder if you have time.
Why don’t you take a walk with me?
I recently found a good park in my neighborhood, please let me guide you where the place is.
we can enjoy fresh air, spring mood and relax comfortably under a leafy tree.
What do you think of joing me?
If you don’t mind, let’s meet up at suseong park at 10 am this Saturday.
Oh, I see. After walking and relaxing, let’s go to have lunch.
I know popular seafood restaurant.
You can find there where you come across the park. Okay?
See you then. Bye.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-05-17
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Good job, Rose. Please review the edits below :)

Hello Leejun, this is Youngsook speaking. How have you been?
I am calling to see if you have any free time.
Would you like to take a walk with me?
I recently found a good park in my neighborhood. Please let me take you there.
We can enjoy fresh, spring air and relax comfortably under a leafy tree.
Would you like to join me?
If you don’t mind, let’s meet up at Suseong park at 10 am this Saturday.
Oh, I see. After walking and relaxing, let’s have lunch.
I know a popular seafood restaurant across from the park. Okay?
See you then. Bye.

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