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제목 | help, please | 등록일 | 2016-05-16 |
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내용 | Hello Leejun, this is youngsook speaking. How have you been? I am calling to wonder if you have time. Why don’t you take a walk with me? I recently found a good park in my neighborhood, please let me guide you where the place is. we can enjoy fresh air, spring mood and relax comfortably under a leafy tree. What do you think of joing me? If you don’t mind, let’s meet up at suseong park at 10 am this Saturday. Oh, I see. After walking and relaxing, let’s go to have lunch. I know popular seafood restaurant. You can find there where you come across the park. Okay? See you then. Bye. |
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담당강사 | Hunter1 | 등록일 | 2016-05-17 |
첨삭 내용 | Good job, Rose. Please review the edits below :) Hello Leejun, this is Youngsook speaking. How have you been? |