Cho,

My full name is Elizabeth Morgan. Morgan is my family name. Nice job with your diary entry! I only had to back two small corrections:

Today I went to the hospital to cure my back. The time on(?) that I arrived at the hospital was 12:50 pm. However, the hospital has lunch time from 1 pm to 2 pm. Then I came to a cafe and am waiting until 2 pm. This event made me set my schedule thoroughly.

Thank you,

Elizabeth

Dear Morgan,

Before writing my diary, I have a question.

According to the website, there are two names for you as follows: 1. Morgan, 2. Elizabeth

Then I'm confused by them. I'd like to know your full name.

Today I went to the hospital to cure my back. The time on(?) that I arrived at the hospital was 12:50 pm. However, the hospital have a lunch time from 1 pm to 2 pm. Then I came to a cafe and am waiting until 2 pm. This event made me set my schedule thoroughly.

Thank you.
Sincerely,
Cho