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제목 Ownership 등록일 2014-05-12
내용 Hi Simon,

Today, I would like to talk about 'Ownership'.

I think Ownership that autonomy, influence and a sense of meaning are all associated with lower stress. If you need to find more joy, take on a new project that will improve your job, team or workplace. While you may not have the same degree of freedom that an enterpreneur does, you can find ways to set the agendas and claims ownership of tasks and projects.

This ownership likely improve your job satisfaction while adding an important accomplishment to your resume.

Thank you for your correction in advance.

Jay
담당강사 Simon 등록일 2014-05-13
첨삭 내용

Hi Simon, Today, I would like to talk about 'Ownership'. I think Ownership that autonomy, influence and a sense of meaning are all associated with lower stress. If you need to find more joy, take on a new project that will improve your job, team or workplace. While you may not have the same degree of freedom that an enterpreneur does, you can find ways to set the agendas and claims ownership of tasks and projects. This ownership likely improve your job satisfaction while adding an important accomplishment to your resume. Thank you for your correction in advance. Jay

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I think Ownership that autonomy, influence and a sense of meaning are all associated with lower stress.

→I think Ownership, autonomy and  influence and a sence of meaning  are all associated with lower stress.

This ownership likely improve your job satisfaction while adding an important accomplishment to your resume.

→ This ownership likely improves  your job satisfaction while adding an important accomplishment to your resume.

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Hi jay!

Everyone wants to be recognized and appreciated for doing a good job. It boosts your confidence to strive more and be consistent in doing excellent work. It feels so good to be known as the person behind the success of a certain project.I'm looking forward to hear your  wonderful stories about success, ownership and recognition.

Have a great day!

Teacher Simon

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