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제목	help, please	등록일	2016-04-21
내용	Korea consists of mountains. Over eighty percents of territory is mountainous area. The famous mountains are Seorak, Halla and Naejang mountain. The changing colors of the leaves in mountains are beautiful and they have many cultural relics. Korea is surrounded by three seas : Eastern, Western and Southern Sea. The number of island is over three thousand. Most of them are uninhabited. Eastern and Western Sea are not deep and people who live in the area make money engaging in aquaculture like oyster, seeweed, see squirt. There are many rivers in korea. Han, Natdong, Gum, Youngsan river flow along the cities and supply water around living people.
담당강사	Hunter1	등록일	2016-04-22
첨삭 내용	Excellent writing, Rose! Korea consists of many mountains. Over eighty percent of Korea is mountainous. The famous mountains are Seorak, Halla, and Naejang mountain. The mountains have many cultural relics, and the changing color of the leaves is beautiful. Korea is surrounded by three seas: Eastern, Western, and Southern Sea. The number of islands is over three thousand. Most of them are uninhabited. The Eastern and Western Seas are not deep, and people who live in the area make money engaging in aquaculture like oysters, seeweed, see squirts. There are many rivers in Korea. The Han, Natdong, Gum, and Youngsan river flow along the cities and supply water to people.