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제목 | Concert 2 | 등록일 | 2016-03-30 |
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내용 | 7 years ago, I and my family went to amusment part named Everlend. It was so populer in my country. We were in the low to watch dolpin show. There are so crowded with people to watch the concert. At that time, my first son was really youger. He was 5 years old. I just cared for my daughter. I and My wife didn't care of my son. When we entered the concert, I and my wife and my daughter just came in. When we sat down our seat, at last we found out there is nothing my son there. We were so suprized. We got so upset and wrried. At once, We went out the concert to find our son. We didn't find our son for a long time, 30 minutes later, we could find our son. He was crying because of scarred also. When we found him, he got into watching game beside vidio arcade game machine. After we found him, we got stable. We couldn't watch the dolpin concert, but we didn't feel sorry about missing that. I told him it doesn't matter. And then I gave him Ice-cream. He recoved his mind. I think this is my memorable experience about a concert. | ||
담당강사 | Sheryl | 등록일 | 2016-03-30 |
첨삭 내용 | 7 years ago, me and my family went to an amusement part named Everland. It is so popular in my country. We were in the front row to watch a dolphin show. It was so crowded with people who wanted to watch the show. At that time, my first son was still very young. He was only 5 years old. I took care of my daughter. Me and my wife didn't care of my son. When we entered the concert, me and my wife and my daughter just came in. When we sat down on our seats, at last, we found out that my son wasn't there. We were so surprised. We got so upset and worried. At once, we went out the concert hall to look for our son. We didn't find our son for a long time, 30 minutes later, we were able to find our son. He was crying because of nervous. When we found him, he got into watching game beside a video arcade game machine. After we found him, we got stable. We couldn't watch the dolphin concert, but we didn't feel sorry about missing that. I told him it doesn't matter. And then I gave him an ice cream. He recoved his mind. I think this is my memorable experience about a concert. |