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제목 | help | 등록일 | 2016-03-30 |
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내용 | Before long I was married, my house was stolen. I lost my wedding gift like watch, ring, necklace. I left the card at the house but I didn’t know that my card was also stolen at that time. 3-4 days later I realized that my card was lost and I reported at the card company promptly and I dropped by there to confirm lost card’s safety. But the thief already paied at several places like message and jewelry shop and so on. I was worried about paying back used money with my lost card. Fortunately if you lost your card and you report the card company as soon as possible, you don’t need pay that money. so I was happy From that time I am very careful with cards |
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담당강사 | Hunter1 | 등록일 | 2016-03-30 |
첨삭 내용 | Excellent job, Rose! PLease review the edited text below :) After getting married, my house was robbed. |