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제목 | OPIC Script Grammer check (Topic_ Shopping) | 등록일 | 2016-03-07 |
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내용 | I guess it was last Saturday when I went to grocery-shopping recently. The recent time I went grocery-shopping was last Sunday. I went to E-mart shopping mall with my husband. It is located near my house. It takes only 10 minutes on foot. So I often go there for grocery-shopping. Last Sunday, I experienced an unexpected event when I was shopping. At that time, I was grocery-shopping with my husband. I found the last beef which was on big sale by order of arrival. I moved fast and I got it! I was so happy! Then, I ran to the vegetable section to buy some tomatoes and carrots for the salad. Luckily the tomatoes were on big sale too! I think the day was very lucky day for me! On the way home I couldn’t stop smiling. |
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담당강사 | Rebecca2 | 등록일 | 2016-03-09 |
첨삭 내용 | I guess it was last Saturday when I went to grocery-shopping recently. (I went grocery shopping) The recent time I went grocery-shopping was last Sunday. (the previous time) I went to E-mart shopping mall with my husband. It is located near my house. It takes only 10 minutes on foot. So I often go there for grocery-shopping. Last Sunday, I experienced an unexpected event when I was shopping. At that time, I was grocery-shopping with my husband. I found the last beef which was on big sale by order of arrival. I moved fast and I got it! I was so happy! Then, I ran to the vegetable section to buy some tomatoes and carrots for the salad. Luckily the tomatoes were on big sale too! I think the day was very lucky day for me! (was a very lucky day) On the way home I couldn’t stop smiling.
Very good job with this writing assignment! Keep up the good work! :) |