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제목 What is differences between the piliphines and S, korea 등록일 2016-02-25
내용 For me, I have went 2times to the piliphines because of oversea projects.
And that were just a business trip so, I didn't enough time to go trip.
My first impression in this country was abad weather which is very humid and hat temperature.
and also there were so many autobikes on the stress therefore when we go the cross walk
we felt a little scared.
담당강사 Rosey 등록일 2016-02-26
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What is differences between the piliphines and S, korea = What are the differences between the Philippines and South Korea?

For me, I have went 2times to the piliphines because of oversea projects. = I visited the Philippines twice because of overseas projects. OR I went to the Philippines two times because of overseas projects.
= They were just business trips because I didn't have enough time to have a trip.
My first impression in this country was abad weather which is very humid and hat temperature. = My first impression of this country was that it has a bad weather which is very humid and the temperature is hot.

and also there were so many autobikes on the stress therefore when we go the cross walk
we felt a little scared. = There were many automobiles on the street too so when we crossed the road, we felt a little scared.

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