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제목 answer for part6 #14 등록일 2016-02-23
내용 There are some advantages if you work as an intern in a place where you are interested. Here are some reasons to support the idea.
First of all, you can get hands-on experience during the time and you will be more likely to get vocational skills. It will be very helpful for you to work in the future.
Secondly, since you can meet many people who work in the field you are interested, you can hear and get good information from them which makes it easy to look for a job.
For those reasons, there are lots of advantages while doing an intern in the field.
담당강사 Richard1 등록일 2016-02-24
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There are some advantages if you work as an intern in a place where you are interested. Here are some reasons to support the idea.
First of all, you can get hands-on experience during the time and you will be more likely to get vocational skills. It will be very helpful for your to work in the future. ("It will be very helpful for you to work in the future" would mean that working in the future will be helpful.)
Secondly, since you can meet many people who work in the field you are interested in, you can hear and get good information from them which makes it easy to look for a job.
For those reasons, there are lots of advantages while being an intern in the field.

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