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제목 answes for part6 #8 등록일 2016-02-18
내용 I agree that morality is an important quality for business people. Here are some reasons to support the idea.
First of all, it affects on the company’s image right away. We don’t have a good image on the company whose business man is not ethical.
Secondly, employees can have a motivation to work hard from the business man who is moral and respected from the society. In order to the company to become a leader in the market, the business man should competent and capable. But being moral is more important than any other thing.
For those reasons, morality is an important quality for business people.
담당강사 Richard1 등록일 2016-02-19
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I agree that morality is an important quality for business people. Here are some reasons to support the idea.
First of all, it affects on the company’s image right away. We don’t have a good image of the company whose business man is not ethical.
Secondly, employees can have a motivation to work hard from the business man who is moral and respected by the society. In order for the company to become a leader in the market, the business man should be competent and capable. But being moral is more important than any other thing.
For those reasons, morality is an important quality for business people.

 

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