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제목 answers for part6 등록일 2016-02-15
내용 1. Do you think it is essential for a company to put up an advertisement to success?
I agree with the statement that it is vital for a company to succeed. There are some reasons for it.
First of all, there are lots of companies in the market; a company should let the public know the company and its product not to fall behind in this competition.
In addition, companies can make a good image of them though an advertisement. People tend to buy a product from a company that seems to have a good image.
For those reasons, in order to success in the market, advertisements are very important for companies.
담당강사 Richard1 등록일 2016-02-16
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1. Do you think it is essential for a company to put up an advertisement to success?
I agree with the statement that it is vital for a company to succeed. There are some reasons for it. ("Here are some reasons" would sound more natural here.)
First of all, there are lots of companies in the market; a company should let the public know the company and its product in order not to fall behind in this competition.
In addition, companies can make a good image of themselves though an advertisement. People tend to buy a product from a company that seems to have a good image.
For those reasons, in order to succeed in the market, advertisements are very important for companies.

 

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