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| 제목 | Make a dialogue using "One" | 등록일 | 2016-02-08 |
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| 내용 | <Dialogue No.1> Cho : Hi There! How is it going these days? James : Hi, Cho. It has been a long time. So far so good. And you? Cho. Me too, However, I'm concered about my car. I would like to sell my old car and buy a new "one". Jmaes: Oh my god, are you out of your mind? You bought your car only 5 months ago! You have to consider it again! <Dialogue No.2> James : Hi, Cho. What are you doing now? Cho : Hi. I'm reparing computers in my team becasue the computers were affted by a certain virus and they are not working well. Jmaes : There are so many "ones"! I think it will take long time for you to repair all of them. |
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| 담당강사 | Hunter1 | 등록일 | 2016-02-09 |
| 첨삭 내용 | *Good work, Cho! I made a few changes to some of the dialogue. Please review the edited version :) Cho : Hi There! How is it going these days? James : Hi, Cho. It has been a long time. So far so good. And you? Cho. Me too, However, I'm concered about my car. I would like to sell my old car and buy a new one. James: Oh, my god! Are you out of your mind!? You bought your car only 5 months ago! You have to reconsider! James : Hi, Cho. What are you doing now? Cho : Hi. I'm reparing computers in my team, becasue the computers were affected by a certain virus, and they are not working well. James : There are so many computers! I think it will take long time for you to repair all of them. |
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