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제목 Blog 3 등록일 2016-02-01
내용 As you might know, I really like to visit some blogs. Nowadays, most people have to get the imformation a lot if you want to begin new hobby. The best way to share impression each other is blogging.
However, 10 years ago, there are few useful blogs on the internat. Also the blogs couldn't be profesional. There are nothing various pictures, reports and so on. And at that time not only the blogs is not famous but also less visitor of the blogs. But many people gather some tips about trip from some blogs. Even people ask the blogs about nice restorant befor eat out. I think the blogs is part of our life.
담당강사 Sheryl 등록일 2016-02-01
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As you might know, I really like to visit some blogs. Nowadays, most people get a lot of information through blogs if they want to begin new hobbies. The best way to share impression to each other is through blogging. However, 10 years ago, there were few useful blogs on the internet. Also, blogs were not so professional. There were only various pictures, reports and so on. And at that time, not only the blog is not famous but also there were few visitors of the blogs. But many people gather some tips about traveling from some blogs. People even ask blogs about nice restaurants before eating out. I think, blogs are part of our life.

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