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제목 | My brothers | 등록일 | 2016-01-25 |
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내용 | Believe or not, I have 3 brothers. Since I am the youngest, I had more chances to be the one who was beaten from other brothers. I sometimes got suprised by myslef because I can not understand how my brothers and me are so disparate each other eventhough we ware born from one mother.One anthropologist said that enviroment and circumstance could be the reason of diversity of human being. If it is ture, how can I explain my disparate brothers. In the mean time, I miss that time when we were fight and cry each other. We were so close each other that we could feel everything without taliking. While, when we come togher in our parents house, we are not as funny or comportable as before. Sometimes we have to find suitable or preper topic which could fix everybody. I can not know what is the reason of this situation. Maybe as time gose by, we are tired of seeing very different people from any kinds of society. |
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담당강사 | Amanda2 | 등록일 | 2016-01-26 |
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Believe or not, I have 3 brothers. Since I am the youngest, my brothers often beat me up. I sometimes suprised by myself, because I can not understand how my brothers and I are so disparate, even though we were born from the same mother. One anthropologist said that the enviroment and circumstance could be the reason for diversity among human beings. If it is true, how can I explain my disparate brothers? In the mean time, I miss that time when we would fight and cry with each other. We were so close to each other that we could feel everything without talking about it. When we came together at our parents house, we were not as funny or comfortable as before. Sometimes we have to find a suitable or proper topic which everyone can agree on. I don't know the reason behind this situation. Maybe as time goes by, we are tired of seeing different types of people from different societies. Great job! I am happy to hear about your brothers and family. I am sorry that you all have evolved to something different, but everyone grows up in different ways! Keep up the hard work! |