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제목 Tomorrow's weather 등록일 2016-01-23
내용 Hi. Hunter.

How's your weekend going so far?

It is very freezing and windy here. Tomorrow will be the coldest day since 2001.

Regarding it, I wrote the sentences as follows:

<Draft>
It is freezing and windy these days.

Tomorrow will be the coldest day since 2001. The weather cast says that the low temperature will be eighteen below zero in the morning.

Therefore, I will stay home all day long tomorrow although some of my friends meet up near my home.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-01-25
첨삭 내용

Yeah, this weekend there was supposed to be a winter storm in my city. It just rained a lot, and Saturday was very windy.

Too cold :(

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