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| 제목 | The bank in my country | 등록일 | 2016-01-19 |
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| 내용 | Let me tell you about the Bank in my country. There are a lot of bank in my country. Woori bank, Sinhan bank, Kookmin bank and so on. Based on bank of business opening is at 9:00 am and closing is at 4:00 pm. My favorite bank is Woori bank. It's very famous bank in my country. Woori bank is located in really near my office. I usually go to the bank to exchange dollars and to loan for buying my house. The bank is really small and cozy. There are five taller and a guard in the bank. Otherwise, there are some teas and coffices on the table for customer, so I can enjoy drinkng a cup of coffiee while I wait for my turn. | ||
| 담당강사 | Sheryl | 등록일 | 2016-01-19 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Let me tell you about banks in my country. There are a lot of banks in my country. Woori bank, Sinhan bank, Kookmin bank and so on. Banks here usually open at 9:00 am and close at 4:00 pm. My favorite bank is Woori bank. It's very famous in my country. Woori bank is located near my office. I usually go to the bank to exchange dollars and to loan for buying my house. The bank is really small and cozy. There are five tellers and a guard in the bank. Otherwise, there are some teas and coffee on the table for customers, so I can enjoy drinking a cup of coffee while waiting for my turn. |
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