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제목 My apartment 등록일 2016-01-18
내용 I live in an apartment which is located in Suwon city near my office.
My place is on the 13th floor. I've moved this house three years ago because it's closer to my office. It takes 5 min walk from my place.
There are three bedrooms, two bathrooms, a kichine, a dinning room and a living room. My favorite room is a living room. There are some funichure.
Such as a big smart TV, a small fish bowl, a air-conditionally and a pretty good couch. When I get home weekends, I usually lie on the couch to catch on some nap. Because I work like hell for a weekday, I'd like to be a couch potato.
Also, My living room has a big view window. When I get up in the eairy moning, I can see sun rise with view window. I feel amazingly happy.
담당강사 Sheryl 등록일 2016-01-18
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I live in an apartment which is located in Suwon City near my office. My place is on the 13th floor. I've moved to this house three years ago because it's closer to my office. It takes 5 minutes on foot from my place. There are three bedrooms, two bathrooms, a kitchen, a dining room and a living room. My favorite room is the living room. There are some furniture such as a big smart TV, a small fish bowl, an air-conditioner and a pretty good couch. When I get home on weekends, I usually lie on the couch to catch up some nap. Because I work like hell for the weekdays, I'd like to be a couch potato. Also, my living room has a big window view. When I get up early in the moning, I can see sun rise with my window view. I feel amazingly happy.

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