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제목 new year resolution 등록일 2016-01-05
내용 2 Jan, 2016 - Resolutions.
I didn't write my resolutions for this year yet. I have usually written them before starting work again. So I would like to leave some resolutions of them in this diary. The one of main resolutions is about English. I am going to have a English skill to lead presentations and meetings by the end of this year. So I am writing a diary in English to improve my written English little by little, and I'd like to study English three hours a day. Is it too aggressive? It could be so, but I need to make an effort that much. Why do I decide this resolution? Frankly, it is not an option to me. It is very important skill to be able to promote and even survive in my company.
I have made many goals for years, I was able to accomplish some and could not do others. but this will influence to my future as much as sum of all resolutions over years.
담당강사 Nicholas1 등록일 2016-01-05
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2 Jan, 2016 - Resolutions. I didn't write my resolutions for this year yet. I have usually written them before starting work again. So I would like to leave some resolutions of them in this diary. The one of main resolutions is about English. I am going to have a English skill to lead presentations and meetings by the end of this year. So I am writing a diary in English to improve my written English little by little, and I'd like to study English three hours a day. Is it too aggressive? It could be so, but I need to make an effort that much. Why do I decide this resolution? Frankly, it is not an option to me. It is very important skill to be able to promote and even survive in my company. I have made many goals for years, I was able to accomplish some and could not do others. but this will influence to my future as much as sum of all resolutions over years.

2 Jan, 2016 - Resolutions. I didn't write my resolutions for this year yet. I have usually written them before starting work again. So I would like to leave some resolutions in this diary. My main resolution is about learning English. I want to have enough English skills in order to lead presentations and meetings by the end of this year. So I am writing a diary in English to improve my written English little by little, and I'd like to study English three hours a day. Is it too aggressive? It could be so, but I need to make an effort that much. Why did I decide this resolution? Frankly, it is not an option to me. It is very important skill to be able to be promoted or even survive in my company. I have made many goals for years, I was able to accomplish some and could not do others. However, this will influence my future as much as the sum of all my resolutions over all the years.

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