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제목 Top ten news in 2015 and ten wish lists in 2016 2/3 등록일 2015-12-29
내용 Then what are my top ten wish lists in 2016? First of all, I wish our family drive safely to prevent them from getting auto accidents.And I hope my wife, the most important person to me, to make a good decision regarding her career and to be fully recovered from her back pain.

What about other family members? My sister in law started doing his new business, so I pray for his success. My mother in law has various pains in her back, knees, arms, and teeth. Wish her to become stronger and healthier. My firstborn son is shorter than his friends, so hope for him to grow steadily so that he becomes tall and wish to be strong and happy. And he sometimes fights with his friends and leave them scars. So I want to see him get along well with his friends and his brother. When I think about my youngest baby boy, it’s still unclear how he will be grown next year. Hope him to grow strong, be wise, be happy, and do what’s right in the eyes of god.
담당강사 Mary1 등록일 2015-12-30
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Then what are my top ten wish lists in 2016? First of all, I wish that our family will drive safely to prevent them from getting into auto accidents.And I hope my wife, the most important person to me, will make a good decision regarding her career and will be fully recovered from her back pain. What about other family members? My sister in law started doing her new business, so I pray for her success. My mother in law has various pains in her back, knees, arms, and teeth. I wish her to become stronger and healthier. My firstborn son is shorter than his friends, so I hope for him to grow steadily so that he becomes tall and I wish for him to be strong and happy. And he sometimes fights with his friends and leaves marks on them. So I want to see him get along well with his friends and his brother. When I think about my youngest baby boy, it’s still unclear how he will be grown next year. I hope him to grow strong, be wise, be happy, and do what’s right in the eyes of god.

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