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제목 | Top ten news in 2015 and ten wish lists in 2016 1/3 | 등록일 | 2015-12-29 |
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내용 | This year is passing so fast and many things happened during whole year as before. In a time order, our family was glad my wife gave birth to our second child well on March. Personally, I studied hard and took TOEFL exam on April. I repaired damaged fenders and rear doors of my car. Our firstborn son started to go to a daycare center. I was promoted to a manager. And I was glad to bring my firstborn son to my office and show him a lighting man’s performance. But I was tortured when Joseph stayed at the hospital for the trouble in his intestine. My wife has been suffering from her back pain, so she’s going to an acupuncture center. I would like to study abroad so I applied for a scholarship supported by the institution for Korea advanced education. I did my best, but I was rejected. On November, our family went to Jeju island and enjoy our vacation. |
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담당강사 | Mary1 | 등록일 | 2015-12-30 |
첨삭 내용 | This year is passing so fast and many things happened during the whole year as before. In a time order, our family was glad my wife gave birth to our second child safely in March. Personally, I studied hard and took the TOEFL exam in April. I repaired the damaged fenders and rear doors of my car. Our firstborn son started to go to a daycare center. I was promoted to a manager. And I was glad to bring my firstborn son to my office and show him a lighting man’s performance. But I was tortured when Joseph stayed at the hospital for the trouble in his intestine. My wife has been suffering from her back pain, so she’s going to an acupuncture center. I would like to study abroad so I applied for a scholarship supported by the institution for Korea advanced education. I did my best, but I was rejected. In November, our family went to Jeju island and enjoy our vacation. |