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제목 | Helle, Cee. I need your help (1/4) | 등록일 | 2015-12-17 |
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내용 | Dear Cee, It is really nice to see u here. As I informed u before, I would like to ask you to correct my abstract of thesis. I need your help, Plz check below. BTW, The text is limited here, So I send you this thesis 4 times. Plz understand^^ - ABSTRACT(1/4) - Since Finance Crisis had been happened from USA, the World economy has been going down and It will be continued for a long time. The Korea economy also is in the trouble by above effect. Meanwhile, Almost all of trade amount of the Global steel market depends on 3 countries such as Korea, China, Japan. Those counties provides huge amount of steel and It makes profit of steel company terrible. To overcome this situation, the steel company of those 3 countries continuously try to develop the new market through doing business in abroad. But, this strategy also show limitation due to severe competition among steel companies. |
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담당강사 | Cee | 등록일 | 2015-12-17 |
첨삭 내용 | Dear Cee, It is really nice to see u here. As I informed u before, I would like to ask you to correct my abstract of thesis. I need your help, Plz check below. BTW, The text is limited here, So I send you this thesis 4 times. Plz understand^^ - ABSTRACT(1/4) - Since Finance Crisis had been happened from USA, the World economy has been going down and It will be continued for a long time. The Korea economy also is in the trouble by above effect. Meanwhile, Almost all of trade amount of the Global steel market depends on 3 countries such as Korea, China, Japan. Those counties provides huge amount of steel and It makes profit of steel company terrible. To overcome this situation, the steel company of those 3 countries continuously try to develop the new market through doing business in abroad. But, this strategy also show limitation due to severe competition among steel companies. ----------------
Hello Nova! Of course I understand and I would definitely like to be of help anytime. So please don;t hesitate to write me. Herewith is my correction.
Eversince the USA was hit by financial crisis, the world economy has been going down and will continue to happen and be felt for a long time. In effect, the Korean economy is also affected adversely due to the world wide financial trouble. Meanwhile, most of the trade amount of global steel market depends on 3 major countries such as South Korea, China and Japan. Those countries provide huge amount of steel and make profit of steel company terrible. To overcome this situation, the steel companies of those 3 countries continuously try to develop new markets by doing business abroad. However, this strategy also show limitation due to the severe competition among steel companies.
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