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제목 | There is nothing to be contrite in our life | 등록일 | 2015-12-14 |
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내용 | What is life? That is very abstract question. In this case, we should be simplify the question if it looks to complicated to answer. Of caouse, I can not answer it as simply as a question such as do you like apple or not. For me, life is everything which shows all part of our feeling and memories. Happiness, reget, sorrow, failure, success and so on. Additionally, I personly believe life is able to be changed depending on what we do in every sigle moment. We are the hero who make our own destiny, therefore there is noting to be contrite in our life. It it better to focus on what we face now that to get stress due to our failure in the past. |
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담당강사 | Amanda2 | 등록일 | 2016-01-05 |
첨삭 내용 | What is life? That is a very abstract question. In this case, we should simplify the question if it looks too complicated to answer. Of course, I can not answer it as simple as a question such as do you like apple or not? For me, life is everything which shows all parts of our feelings and memories. Happiness, reget, sorrow, failure, success and so on. Additionally, I personally believe life is change depending on what we do in every sigle moment. We are the hero who make our own destiny, therefore, there is nothing to be contrite in our life. It is better to focus on what we face now instead of getting stress due to our failure in the past. |