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제목 Please check my sentences gramatically(12.9 - 1) 등록일 2015-12-13
내용 I've got a medicine from a pharmacy.
I love to eat meat as breakfast.
However, I have a breakfast with fruits or sweet potato because I have to work out in the morning.
Before exercising, if I eat heavy, maybe my stomach gets in trouble.
When I skip breakfast, I feel starving and energy less.

I tried to get a job, I made a simulated job interview group.
He looked like making a fense to members including me.
After I got a job, I had opportunities that I hanged out with him.
I got that I have misunderstood him.
He is not arrogant but reserved person.
He turned out to have in common a lot with me.
We don't enjoy our time to have dinner, drink beer like past.
I miss our past that we could spend our time more free.
I regret that I misunderstood him.
If I didn't have any prejudice about him, I could more enjoy with him.

I never have had misunderstanding about my parents.
We have many chances to conversation with each other.
담당강사 Kendra1 등록일 2015-12-14
첨삭 내용

I've got some medicine from the Pharmacy. I love to eat meat for breakfast. However, I have breakfast with fruits or sweet potato because I have to work out in the morning. Before exercising, if I eat heavym my stomach might get into trouble. When I skip breakfast, I feel very hungry with no energy. I tried to get a job, I made a simulated job interview group. He looked like he was making a fense(/friends) to the members including me. After I got the job, I had opportunities that I got to hang out with him. I thinkI have misunderstood him. He seemed arrogant but actually a reserved person. He turned out to have some things in common with me. We ddn't enjoy our time to have dinner or even drink beer like before. I missed the things that we used to do. I do regret that I misunderstood him. If I didn't have anything prejudice towards him, I could've enjoyed more time with him. I never have had any misunderstandings towards my parents. We got many chances to have a conversation with each other.

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