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| 제목 | heavily snowing | 등록일 | 2015-12-03 |
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| 내용 | It was snowing heavily this morning. I usually get to my office by driving my car but today it was too scary to drive. I had to slow down my car on the highway. It typically takes me about 30 min in the early moring to get there, but today 1 hour! But I like snowing. Because I like skiing. When I was in my teens, I'd enjoyed skiing most weekends in winter. It gave me a chance to feel thrills from high speeds of adventures. After having my kis, unfortunately I have not enough chance to enjoy skiing. Someday I'll go to ski with my famliy. We are going to have a happy time. |
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| 담당강사 | Wynston1 | 등록일 | 2015-12-04 |
| 첨삭 내용 | It was snowing heavily this morning. I usually get to my office by driving my car, but today it was too scary to drive. I had to slow down my car on the highway. It typically takes me about 30 min in the early morNing to get there, but today, IT TOOK 1 hour! But I like THE snow, because I like skiing. When I was in my teens, I INTERESTING EXPERIENCE GRACE! I LOOK FORWARD TO SPEAKING WITH YOU TODAY ... |
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