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제목 | Please check my sentences grammartically | 등록일 | 2015-12-01 |
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내용 | I have to save almost my salary at the bank. Some people told me that I would feel lonely. My parents were friendly to me. Until 13 years old, I begged them to make a sibling. I thought being an only child would be better than having a sibling. I could see mold everywhere on the wall. I decided to change wall paper. At the beginning, I headed to home depot to get home improvement items. I removed the wall paper and scrapped off the mold. I put the wall paper on the wall. I had to change the wall paper of the ceiling. It was risky, because I needed to be on the ladder. I lost my balance when I was on the ladder. I fell on the floor and twisted my ankle. I knocked down the paint bucket on the floor. The paint made the floor dirty. It was painful, and I felt like I was at the end of the world. Fortunately, there were all of my family members. They helped with cleaning. It took just 20mins. Ever since, I be careful when I’m on the ladder or go down the ladder. |
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담당강사 | Kendra1 | 등록일 | 2015-12-09 |
첨삭 내용 | I have to save my WHOLE salary at the bank. Some people told me that I would feel lonely. My parents ARE friendly to me. Until I WAS 13 years old, I begged them to GIVE ME a sibling. I thought being an only child would be better than having a sibling. I could see mold everywhere on the wall. I decided to change THE wallpaper. At the beginning, I headed to home depot to get SOME home improvement items. I removed the wall paper and scrapped off the mold. I put the wallpaper on the wall. I had to change the wallpaper of the ceiling. It was risky, because I needed to be on the ladder. I lost my balance when I was on the ladder. I fell on the floor and twisted my ankle. I knocked down the bucket OF PAINT on the floor. The paint made the floor dirty. It was painful, and I felt like I was at the end of the world. Fortunately, all of my family members WERE THERE. They helped with THE cleaning. It took just 20mins. Ever since, I WAS BEING careful when I’m CLIMBING on the ladder or TO go down the ladder. |