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제목 | Movie 1 | 등록일 | 2015-11-12 |
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내용 | My father likes to go to the movie, so, when I was child I went to the movie theater often with my family, usually that movie has somewhat educational lesson. The facility of the movie theater was not nice. It was even cold in there for winter, there were filled with many people, the reservation system was inconvenient. But at that time there were few friends who go to there, and moreover I had small pleasure to go down town and enjoy the special culture life after that we could eat special meal, such a Chinese menu or Hamburg steak. So I could boast this special experience in school. | ||
담당강사 | MaryJo2 | 등록일 | 2015-11-12 |
첨삭 내용 | My father likes to go to the movies, so, when I was child I went to the movie theater often with my family, usually that movie has somewhat educational lesson. The facility of the movie theater was not nice. It was even cold in there for winter, there were filled with many people, the reservation system was inconvenient. But at that time there were few friends who has somewhat educational lesson* Kelly Americans would say usually that movie was kind of educational in nature. enjoy the special culture life Here we would say: enjoy a little culture .
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