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제목 books 등록일 2015-11-09
내용 I want to tell you about books which I read in childhood, and now. When I younger I used to enjoy read the novel or a love story. In the past I was sensitive, So love story made me touched.
But nowadays I read mainly with the self-help book. So now I’ reading the book, David and Goliath by Malcolm Gladwell,
Some times I read the book same as past, I want to show a typical example is the little price of Saint Exupery of France. So it is not difficult to read as I get older I can understand it more deeply
담당강사 MaryJo2 등록일 2015-11-09
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I want to tell you about books which I read in childhood, and books I read now. When I was younger I used to enjoy reading  a novel or a love story. In the past I was sensitive, So a love story made me touched  touched me.  But nowadays I read mainly with the self-help books. So now I’ reading the book, David and Goliath by Malcolm Gladwell, Some times I read the book same as past I used to, I want to show a A typical example is the little prince of by du Saint Exupery of France. So it is not difficult to read but as I get older I can understand it more deeply

 

Kelly, great job using When I was younger and self help books.  Good examples and good information in this answer.

 

 

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