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제목 Self introdution. 등록일 2015-11-04
내용 Hi, there.
My name is Han Kwon-tak.
I'm a 37 year-old male.
I'm a very positive person and like interacting with people.
As for my hobbies, I like to collect animation figures, make model railways.
I've got married seven years ago and I have two children.
담당강사 Jeff2 등록일 2015-11-04
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Hi, there. My name is Han Kwon-tak. I'm a 37 year-old male. I'm a very positive person and like interacting with people. As for my hobbies, I like to collect animation figures, and make model railways. I've got married seven years ago, and I have two children. (or I've been married for seven years, and I have two children.)

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