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제목 Lingering attachment to books 등록일 2015-11-02
내용 22 Habits That Will Make Your Life a Little More Peaceful Each Day

1. Throw out, sell or donate everything you don’t need.

I would like to talk about books. I like books and I think that everything is in books. I can’t remember how many books I have bought. Some of them are just kept unread for the future free time of me. Interestingly I can’t spare time for them because new books are made day to day. And I can’t spend time to the old books. So they just keep the space of my bookshelves. Yes, there has been several times I can throw out or sell them. But I couldn’t throw away them because much money spent on them.
So nowadays I try to buy e-books if possible. No physical space is not needed for e-books and I can read or refer to them anywhere anytime. I think there are many people like me and the demand for e-books has grown up hugely. Some e-books are more expensive than physical books.
담당강사 Hunter2 등록일 2015-11-03
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22 Habits

That Will Make Your Life a Little More Peaceful Each Day

1. Throw out, sell or donate everything you don’t need. I would like to talk about books. I like books, and I think that everything is in books. I can’t remember how many books I have bought. Some of them are just kept unread for my future free time. Interestingly, I can’t spare time for them, because new books are made daily. And I can’t give time to the old books, so they just take up space of my bookshelves. There have been several times I could have thrown them out or sold them, but I couldn’t throw them away, because I spent so much money on them. Nowadays, I try to buy e-books if possible. No physical space is needed for e-books, and I can read or refer to them anywhere, anytime. I think there are many people like me, and the demand for e-books has grown hugely. Some e-books are more expensive than physical books.

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