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제목 | Introduction myself | 등록일 | 2015-11-01 |
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내용 | Let me introduce myself. My name is Kyehwa Jeong. My English name is Monica, my baptismal name. I work for Hanwha Total as a trading manager. I am handling Gasoline. I've been working for 10 years. I am satisfied with my job and conditions. There are 6 people in my family, my husband, 2 kids, and my parents. My parents take care of my kids, as I'm a working mom. I live in Seoul. My hobby is hiking, walking, swimming, reading books, watching movies, performance and concerts and so on. But, I usually spend my time with my kids when I have free time. Recently, I try to study English as I have to take OPiC test in November. I took Opic 3 years ago. My score was IM2. But for this time, I have to get over IH level. That's why I signed up for this class. I expect this class will be very helpful to get better grade for the coming OpiC. Thank you for paying attention to my instroction. I look forward to talking with you over the phone Tuesday. See you then. |
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담당강사 | Kendra2 | 등록일 | 2015-11-02 |
첨삭 내용 | Let me introduce myself. My name is Kyehwa Jeong. My English name is Monica, my baptismal name. I work for Hanwha Total as a trading manager. I am handling Gasoline. I've been working for 10 years. I am satisfied with my job and conditions. There are 6 people in my family, my husband, 2 kids, and my parents. My parents take care of my kids, as I'm a working mom. I live in Seoul. My hobby is hiking, walking, swimming, reading books, watching movies, performance and concerts and so on. But, I usually spend my time with my kids when I have free time. Recently, I try to study English as I have to take OPiC test in November. I took Opic 3 years ago. My score was IM2. But for this time, I have to get over IH level. That's why I signed up for this class. I expect this class will be very helpful to get better grade for the coming OpiC. Thank you for paying attention to my instroction. I look forward to talking with you over the phone Tuesday. See you then.
Hi Monica!
A pleasure to meet you! You seem to have had plenty of English experiences as your message is very good in details. I see that you want to improve your score result on th OpiC exam. Though this will be a quick month for you since you mentioned that you will have the exam this November, am I right? Hope you can catch up so you can get the IH level. Talk to you tomorrow Monica and have a nice Monday ahead!
Teacher Kendra |