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제목 Do my best in the present and go for the bright future! (2/2) 등록일 2015-10-30
내용 What is clear is that I can have free time one hour at dawn with my best. I can make additional one hour in my office before starting work, during lunch break, and after finishing my work. Another one hour will be secured while I take a subway for commuting.

To apply for Ph.D. in accounting, I desperately need to get high GMAT score and research experience. I’ll try to think about how to prepare for GMAT exam and how to make a research experience. The former one is depending on my efforts and some monetary investment for taking GMAT lectures. The latter one is, now I have no idea. But I believe I’ll be able to find a good way to get a research experience from a mentor because God will help the person who does his or her best and has a good purpose.
담당강사 Mary1 등록일 2015-11-02
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What is clear is that I can have free time one hour at dawn at my best. I can make an additional hour in my office before starting work, during lunch break, and after finishing my work. Another hour will be secured while I take a subway for commuting. To apply for a Ph.D. in accounting, I desperately need to get a high GMAT score and research experience. I’ll try to think about how to prepare for the GMAT exam and how to make a research experience. The former one is depending on my efforts and some monetary investment for taking GMAT lectures. The latter one is, now I have no idea. But I believe I’ll be able to find a good way to get a research experience from a mentor because God will help the person who does his or her best and has a good purpose.

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