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제목 Thinking after reporting to the management (1/2) 등록일 2015-10-28
내용 I reported the result of technical due diligence regarding the nickel mine in Indonesia to the vice president, Mr. Yoo. I prepared for the report almost during two weeks, so I was a bit confident for explaining the result of the due diligence to him. His response was not bad. But he pointed out various things that I didn’t expect while preparing for the report.

Actually, whenever my boss was corrected by the vice president when my boss reported to him, I couldn’t understand why he didn’t prepare well and didn’t expect to make up for those important points the vice president mentioned in advance. As a result, I became to look down my boss.

However, as I got similar response from the vice president while I reported to him, I realized that seeing and doing something are totally different. So it would be better for me not to judge something in advance unless I have done it or have experience about it.
담당강사 Mary1 등록일 2015-10-29
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I reported the result of technical due diligence regarding the nickel mine in Indonesia to the vice president, Mr. Yoo. I prepared for the report during most of two weeks, so I was a bit confident for explaining the result of the due diligence to him. His response was not bad. But he pointed out various things that I didn’t expect while preparing for the report. Actually, whenever my boss was corrected by the vice president when my boss reported to him, I couldn’t understand why he didn’t prepare well and didn’t expect to make up for those important points the vice president mentioned in advance. As a result, I began to look down on my boss. However, as I got similar responses from the vice president while I reported to him, I realized that seeing and doing something are totally different. So it would be better for me not to judge something in advance unless I have done it or have experience about it.

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