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제목 | health | 등록일 | 2015-10-19 |
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내용 | I usually go to the gym called world gym. It is located near world station Maybe, it takes about 30 minutes from my apartment and I usually go there by my car There, I can see many things. There are people working out, running, stretching, and personal training. Also, there are many treadmills, dumbbell, stationary bikes and so on. It is close to my apartment and it’s the most famous gym in my neighborhood. And Near the gym, there are many facilities such as restaurants, cafes and convenient store. And also you can go there easily because there is a free parking lot I think the gym is always safe, clean and well-maintained. |
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담당강사 | Ana | 등록일 | 2015-10-19 |
첨삭 내용 | I usually go to the gym called World Gym. It is located near world station. Maybe, it takes about 30 minutes from my apartment and I usually go there by car. There, I can see many things. There are people working out, running, stretching, and do personal training. Also, there are many treadmills, dumbbells, stationary bikes and so on. It is close to my apartment and it’s the most famous gym in my neighborhood. And near the gym, there are many facilities such as restaurants, cafes and convenient store. And also you can go there easily because there is a free parking lot. I think the gym is always safe, clean and well-maintained. > Hi there Gerald! Thank you for writing today. Be careful with your sentences and make sure they do have punctuation marks called 'period'. Have a nice day! ^_^ |