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| 제목 | oversea business trip 1 | 등록일 | 2015-10-13 |
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| 내용 | The first city where I first visted as a business trip was Moscow, Russia. I'm supposed to deploy a IT system which is already developed in South Korea and train system users how they can use IT system. The journey was with 3 colleague and we were supposed to meet at the Incheon airport. After we met we checked in but we all had seperated seat. I understand, it's more comfortable than we seat closely. The fight duration was over 10 hours. It was boring time to me. I tried to sleep in the seat but most of time I was still awaken. After we arrived the Moscow airport, we passed the customs which was long long waiting line so it take more an hour. After that we met the taxi driver who are already arrange. It takes one more hour to get the hotel. The hotel's name was Sputnic that was reknowned astronaut in Russia. Totally it takes more than 15 hours. It was really bored. |
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| 담당강사 | Jasmine2 | 등록일 | 2015-10-14 |
| 첨삭 내용 | The first city I visited as a business trip was Moscow, Russia. I was supposed to deploy an IT system which was already developed in South Korea and train system users on how they can use the IT system. The journey was with 3 colleague and we were supposed to meet at the Incheon airport. After we met, we checked in but we all had seperate seats. I understand, it's more comfortable than if we sat closely. The fight duration was over 10 hours. It was a boring time for me. I tried to sleep in the seat but most of time I was still awake. After we arrived at the Moscow airport, we passed |
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