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제목 | realitity show | 등록일 | 2015-10-13 |
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내용 | I’d like to talk about reality show on TV between the past and now Uhm, well I thin people’s attitude have changed a lot. and my favorite TV program is a reality show called “Real Man” which reminds me of the memory my young age by indirect experiencing army life. Before people couldn’t see a reality show on TV because they were busy in their workplaces and it ‘not fun actually. But these days, most people say that reality show can give a fun something like “Real Man”. And also they can give you vicarious satisfaction and useful information.’ In my view, they can release your stress. It’s worthy~~ |
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담당강사 | Ana | 등록일 | 2015-10-14 |
첨삭 내용 | I’d like to talk about reality show on TV between the past and now. Uhm, well I think people’s attitude have changed a lot. My favorite TV program is a reality show called “Real Man” which reminds me of the memory of my young age by indirect experiencing army life. Before people couldn’t see a reality show on TV because they were busy in their workplaces and it's not fun actually. But these days, most people say that reality show can give something like an entertaining show like “Real Man”. And also they can give you satisfaction and useful information. In my view, they can release your stress. It’s worth it. > Hi there! Thank you for writing today. Just be careful with your words and how you use them in the sentence. Keep it up! ^_^ |