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| 제목 | cooking (I want to change as a american style english belows | 등록일 | 2015-10-13 |
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| 내용 | I like all kinds of Korean food, such as tokbbokgi, noddles, sundae, pajeon and so on. Among them I like to cook pajeon. pajeon is a Korean traditional food and it is a health food made of vegetables. So, Korean eat pajeon especially on holidays because it’s very easy to make. To make pajeon, Firstly you have to prepare ingredients such as onions, carrots, seafood, pumpkin, pepper, hot source, mushroom, flour and so on. Next you need to make dough. Then mix them well. Lastly, panfry them together. That’s all. And Enjoy your pajeon! |
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| 담당강사 | Ana | 등록일 | 2015-10-14 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I like all kinds of Korean food, such as tokbbokgi, noddles, sundae, pajeon and so on. Among them I like to cook pajeon. Pajeon is a Korean traditional food and it is a healthy food made of vegetables. So, Korean eat pajeon especially on holidays because it’s very easy to do. To make pajeon, Firstly you have to prepare ingredients such as onions, carrots, seafood, pumpkin, pepper, hot source, mushroom, flour and so on. Next you need to make a dough. Then mix them well. Lastly, fry them together. That’s all. And Enjoy your pajeon! > Hi! Thanks for writing your thoughts to me today. Have a nice day!^_^ |
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