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| 제목 | UNIT 12 my answer | 등록일 | 2015-10-13 |
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| 내용 | Question 6. I go to karaoke for several reasons. First, I think it is a good place to relieve my stress from daily life. Secondly, I can sing loudly there. Actually I can not sing loudly at home because of my neighbors. So I can enjoy singing at karaoke without any disturbance. For these reasons I go to karaoke. |
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| 담당강사 | Ivy | 등록일 | 2015-10-13 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Question 6. I go to karaoke for several reasons. First, I think it is a good place to relieve my stress from daily life. > First, I think it is a good place to relieve my stress from my daily life.
Secondly, I can sing loudly there. > Second, I can sing loudly in there.
Actually I can not sing loudly at home because of my neighbors. > Actually, I can not sing loudly at home because of my neighbors.
So I can enjoy singing at karaoke without any disturbance. > So, I can enjoy singing at karaoke without any disturbance.
For these reasons I go to karaoke. > For these reasons, I go to karaoke. |
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