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| 제목 | my favorite tv program | 등록일 | 2015-10-12 |
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| 내용 | I dont like to watch tv but I seldome watch tv when I finish the work Recently I enjoyed tv drama respond 1997. This drama's story is about the 1997's High school student . I remembered my highschool 'episode .because I was a highschool in 1997. So I had a same experience through the drama. I think korean drama's story is very sensation and shocking that is secret of birth or rich man's life and violance story. That is why the korean drama is famous from other countries. Actually I like to watch a documentary program .recently I watched some documentary program that is about theory of quantum. Because I like a scientifiction . |
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| 담당강사 | Madie | 등록일 | 2015-10-12 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I dont like to watch tv . Recently I enjoyed tv drama respond 1997. This drama's story is about the 1997's High school student . I remembered my highschool 'episode .because I was a highschool in 1997. So I had a same experience with the drama. I think korean drama's story is very sensational and shocking that is secret of birth or rich man's life and violence story. That is why the korean drama is famous from other countries. Actually I like to watch a documentary program .Recently I watched some documentary program that is about theory of quantum. Because I like a science fiction.
Sometimes its difficult to expres so well.In that case learn to gather your thoughts, choose the most appropriate term to use then organize those terms to make a good sentence. Thank you!
Teacher MAdie |
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