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| 제목 | Unit 14 | 등록일 | 2015-10-07 |
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| 내용 | My job is business analyst for implementing IT system on the client's company. The core competency of the job is analyzing client's business process and researching information in order to make better recommendations. About the competency, I think I fortunately alread have had. I like surverying or collectting informations and orgarnizing information. In that point of view, I think my job is matching me. | ||
| 담당강사 | Jasmine2 | 등록일 | 2015-10-08 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I work as a business analyst implementing IT systems for the client's company. The core competency of the job is analyzing client's business processes and researching information in order to make better recommendations. About the competency, I think I fortunately already have had. I like surverying and collecting and orgarnizing information. From that point of view, I think my job is suits me. About the competency, I think I fortunately already have had. --> I don't understand this sentence? You mean you were already good at the job? |
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